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Friday, 19 October 2012

Bonjour France !!

Bonjour!!!!

Salut France!!    

                              
Beaucoup de gens de France ont été voir mon blog cette semaine!

12!  Hourra!

Continuer à visiter mon blog et n'oubliez pas de commenter!

Si j'ai fait des erreurs,excusez mon français.Je suis en train d'apprendre


Translation:


Good Day!!!!

Hello French people !

Lots of people from France have been viewing my blog this week!

12! Hurray!

Continue visiting my blog and don't forget to comment!

If i have made any mistakes, excuse my French, I am just learning.

Monday, 1 October 2012

The Diary of Amos Lee - A review

I would like to give this series  4 and a half stars out of 5 as my rating.


                                                       The Diary of Amos Lee


The Diary of Amos Lee is a series of books written by Adeline Foo. The books in this series are:
1. I sit, I write, I flush
2. Girls, Guts and Glory
3. I'm twelve. I'm tough, I tweet

I sit , I write . I flush!
Girls, Guts and Glory!
I'm twelve,I'm tough, I tweet
The diary of Amos Lee is about a a 12 year old boy whose mother tells him to write a diary when he goes to the toilet to improve his multitasking skill etc.

Amos Lee is the main character with Alvin and Anthony- his friends. He has a sister whom he calls WPI for Whiny, Pesky , Irritating.

The illustrations are funny, the story line is wonderful, the books are full of delightfully disgusting stuff.

This book is great for 5 - 9 graders and even older people with their sense of humour intact.
I recommend this book for all wimpy kid fans and others who want to just take a break from serious stuff and try something new.

I LOVED this book and i would like to say that my friend and I spent our library hour at school by trying to hide our giggles and disgusted faces from the librarian when we read these books.


Amos Lee
( this series lost half cos I haven't seen anyone give anything full stars in a review.)
 

Read and enjoy!
Don't forget to give me your comments about this series and about my review!.

Saturday, 22 September 2012

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Sunday, 2 October 2011

WITCH CHANT

WITCH CHANT

TO MAKE ONE INVISIBLE

Fire rise and stir it nice
We want more mischief an malice
Chant, Chant with an evil grin
Entrails* of a cockroach throw it in
Spoonful of pyramid sand
Cheese buried in thousand year old land
Chink of brain and eye of a mouse
Fungus from the haunted house
Tongue of a snake and whiskers from a rat
Fang of a vampire, wings of a bat
Feather of a phoenix, Unicorn’s horn
Wrappings of a mummy which isn’t torn
Fire rise and stir it nice
We want more mischief and malice
Pit viper’s venom, claws of an owl and Frankenstein’s fingernail
To the chopping board go
Skin of an earthworm, A witch’s broom and hairs from a werewolf’s tail
Into the potion go
Bit of molded bread filled with dread
Moustache of the invisible man
Into the cauldron go
Foul smell grow and grow
To make this potion we have paid a price
So hide us from prying eyes
Fire rise and stir it nice
We want more mischief and malice
*Entrails: Intestine I wrote this poem in the style of Shakespeare(Macbeth-Double, Double…)

Monday, 19 September 2011

RAIN


Rain, Rain, Rain, wonderful rain,

Falling on the road,

Pitter Pat, Pitter Pat,

That’s how the rain falls on the mat!


There is my sister jumping in puddles,

And there is my dog getting all muddled!


Rain, Rain, Rain, wonderful rain,

Rain very hard with thunder and lightning,

And water all the trees

To get a nice breeze!

EVERY TIME I CLIMB A TREE

Every time I climb a tree,
Every time I climb a tree,
I feel the strong breeze
Brushing past my cheek

With every jump and every leap,
I go to the leaves’ heap
I gaze at the hills and animals yonder,
With a great sense of wonder

I wish nobody would cut a tree
Because it is the best binoculars I can see!
I look and look at the hills and animals
With a face so bright,
I will always remember these sights all right!

Wednesday, 14 September 2011

April Antics

“Guess what?” asked Dink Duncan “There’s

a circus coming to Green Lawn”.” Really?”

Ruth Rose Hathaway asked. She always dressed in one colour. Today, from her headband to shoes was blue. Josh Pinto’s freckled face appeared over a book. His twin brothers Bradley and Brian had finished eating. They had red hair and brown eyes. Dink’s Cousin Lucy Armstrong and Ruth Rose’s brother Nate were playing

Chess. Dink and Lucy had blond hair and

Blue eyes. Nate had black hair and brown eyes like his sister. “Shall we go to the

Circus today? “Lucy asked. Dink shook his head”No.Not today, I have to do some errands for my mom”.

The next day at the circus, Ruth Rose was

Green from head to toe.” You look like a tree” Brian joked. They bought the tickets and went in. Josh and the twins bought popcorn as soon as they went in.

They saw clowns, horses, trapeze, an elephant playing baseball and performing

Dogs. A clown was always tripping over his feet. He had make-up on his cheeks a red nose and a feathery hat. There were white horses and brown horses.They also saw a talking parrot. Then, they all ate ice creams in Ellie’s Diner. After eating ice creams they went home.

Next day, Lucy bought a newspaper. On top of the page was written in big, black

Letters:

BURGLARY IN WALKER HOUSE

Lucy rushed into the house to show it to Dink. Dink’s mom told her that Dink, Josh and Ruth Rose had gone for a picnic.

Then Nate came to Dink’s house. “Did you see the newspaper?” he asked breathlessly. “Yes, let’s go to Josh’s house”.

At Josh’s house, they showed the twins the newspaper. ”Let’s go and talk to Mr.Walker. We can try to solve the mystery like the older kids” said Lucy. ”And look for clues” Nate added. ”We can find suspects” Bradley continued. ”And write it down in my notebook” finished Brian. They all laughed.

.

They walked over to Mr.Walker’s house.

They rang the bell...A man who appeared to be thirty years old opened the door.

He was wearing red sneakers, a yellow shirt and a blue baseball cap. “Are you Mr.Walker?” Brian asked. The man nodded,

“Come in” he said.

The kids introduced themselves. ”Ah!” He said”So, you are the siblings of Green Lawn’s detectives Dink, Josh and Ruth Rose”. Lucy said “We are here to try and solve this mystery. I Hope you don’t mind if we ask you some questions?”. “No, I don’t mind at all”. “Can you tell us what happened exactly?”. “My cook and I had our dinner and went to sleep” he said.

“Was there anyone else other than your cook and you?” Lucy asked. ”No, no one else. Then suddenly we heard a sound of someone going out through the window. I took a stick and went outside. There was no one out. I switched on the lights only to find that all my money, my mother’s jewels, the old objects that I had collected and some old stamps”. Brian was taking it all down in his notebook.

“What time was it when you woke up?”. .Lucy asked. “It was about 1;00 A.M.

I then called Officer Fallon”. He said.

“Thank You Mr.Walker. Can we look for clues now?” asked Nate. “Yes, you can”

They searched high and low. Then suddenly, Brian gave a yell. They saw some white paint on a wall. Lucy took a photo using her camera which she had got for her birthday from Dink.They went outside and stood near the window. There was a big, green feather lying down.

Bradley picked it up and kept it in his pocket. “A man could easily get in through this window.” Lucy said. They went back in. Lucy had one last look in the bedroom. She saw something shiny under the bed. She took it. It was red and circular. She kept it I her pocket. They said thanks to Mr.Walker. When they were about to leave, Bradley asked “What’s the cook’s name and address.” Mr.Walker said “His name is Jack Harris. He lives in Oak Street.” They said thank you and left.

The kids trooped into Nate’s house. ”I am hungry”, Brian announced. They made sandwiches and ate them. After eating, they wrote down the suspects and clues.

Suspects;

· Jack Harris

Lucy displayed the three clues on the table. Brian looked at the red thing and said “That looks like Rudolph’s nose”. “Of course, that could be part of a disguise” said Lucy.

Clues;

· White paint on the wall(have taken a photo)

· Long, Green feather

· Red, Plastic nose (probably for disguise)

“I think we should go and ask some questions to Mr.Harris” said Lucy.

“Cool, then we can have ice creams in Ellie’s Diner when we come back” said Bradley.

They went to Oak Street and found the cook’s house. They said to Mr.Harris that they were trying to solve the mystery.

Mr.Harris said” I saw a torch light in the hall, I thought that it was my master trying to find something. After sometime I heard my master yell to me. I went and saw that everything was stolen. I have some work to do now. I am sorry I have to go now”. The kids said thanks and went to Ellie’s Diner to eat ice creams.

They saw a flyer on a tree. It was about the circus:

COME TO THE CIRCUS

SEE:

· WALTZING HORSES

· CLEVER DOGS

· FUNNY CLOWNS

· TRAPEZE WALKERS

AND MUCH,MUCH MORE…

Then suddenly, Lucy got it “Clowns” she suddenly cried.

”Of course, why didn’t I think of it before?. Clowns wear white make up, they wear feathery hats, and they have shiny, red noses. It will also be a perfect disguise. Nobody will recognize the thief because of the clown costume.” She said.

“There are three clowns there. Mr.William, Mr.Robin and Mr.Potter. Have you also noticed that the hats of the clowns had nine feathers each.” Said Bradley. ”The clown with eight feathers must be the thief. He also won’t have his plastic nose” said Brian.They went to the circus again.

They saw the circus clowns again.Nate said that his legs were feeling tired. They found a bench and sat down. They didn’t find anything unusual there. Just as they were about to go. Lucy remembered that she had left her coat in the bench.

The others waited for her. When Lucy took her coat, she heard some quarrelling nearby. She bent down to look. One of the clowns Mr.Potters was saying “I am sorry but I lost my fake nose somewhere” to the head of the circus.

Lucy ran back to tell the others what she had heard. All of them went to Officer Fallon.

They told him the whole story from the beginning to the end. They showed him the clues and the suspects. When Lucy had ran back to get her coat, Brian had added three more suspects to his list.

Suspects:

· Mr.Jack Harris

· Mr.William

· Mr.Potters

· Mr.Robins

Officer Fallon heard the story and went to the circus. He asked Mr.Potters whether what the kids said was true. Mr.Potters was scared and confessed. The clown was arrested and the stolen things were all returned to Mr.Walker.

Officer Fallon said to the kid’s parents “Without them we wouldn’t have caught the thief.”. They had a ‘Great Job’ party for them.

Brian, Bradley. Lucy and Nate all told about their mystery to Dink, Josh and Ruth Rose and they listened big-eyed and amazed.

THE END


(This story is based on Ron Roy's Calendar Mysteries series.)

Sunday, 3 May 2009

THE HYPNOTIZING TOY CAT


Introduction
This story is not based from the world we live. It is based on the future of our world. The future held many interesting things. Two animals were mixed into one like dognakes, quogs, cowflappers and many more!. But the people living there were cruel, lazy, selfish and very bad mannered. There was one good person who was very good at heart. That was the famous and clever Professor Quentin!.

About Professor Quentin

Professor Quentin was a scientist. He thought "Hmm,I must make all the people kind", He got an idea. He made a toy cat. It was not an ordinary toy cat. It had special powers. Read on and you will see the powers of the cat.

The Story

One day, A boy named Tom saw the cat. He liked the cat very much. So, he bought it. But, he illtreated the toy cat. He would throw them somewhere in his home, he would make it dirty. He would not even bother about. After some days something very unbelievable happened! Tom was about to throw it somewhere,when he suddenly gazed at it. The toy's eyes seemed to swirl around!. He rubbed his eyes and said "It must be a trick of the light. I must be dreaming". He hoped he would soon get up on his bed and he would realise it was all a dream. He stared at its eyes his eyes growing bigger as his curiosity grew bigger. The future people were known to have great curiosity. Then suddenly he felt dazed and he din't know what he was doing!. The simple,ordinary cat had hypnotized him! The cat started to speak in a lulling voice "from now you will never be selfish, unkind or badmannered. You will be very good" it said as it was programmed by Profesor Quentin. It hypnotized the other members of the family, said the same thing and released them from the trance. And amazingly no one knew what they had been doing but they knew they had to be good and kind. This was happening to other children as well! Then slowly, slowly the full future world was good and kind. This was how the full future world became kind. Now don't you think that Professor Quentin was clever?

THE END

Thursday, 1 May 2008

THE TWO SILLY HANDS

Two hands were swimming in a bucket.In that bucket there was also a mug.The mug was wearing a headphone and was listening to music.The two hands names were JokerJoe and Stupid Joe.That time stupid joe said suddenly"this mug is going whereever we are going"So the two hands went near the mug and said"you are going whereever we are going so will you jump out of the bucket.Because the mug was wearing the headphone it could'nt hear the hands.At that time jokerjoe said"we can sit on top of the mug and use it as a submarine".stupid joe said"what a great idea,why din't we think of it before"So they put on their snorkels and sat on top of the mug.They said "wheeeee!".Then they got down.When the mug saw them climbing of it's of back it removed the headphone.The two hands narrated what had happened.They all laughed together.Then the two hands went to their homes.


THE END

Saturday, 12 April 2008

Whisky Rabbit

Whisky Rabbit

One day Whisky Rabbit was playing with Misty mouse in play land, which was in Treetop land.

Whisky rabbit’s grandmas’s house was near the Himalayas .Suddenly aunt Kitty came with a suitcase.she said, “Come on Whisky! Come on Misty mouse !,let’s all go to grandma’s house ” . So they went to grandma’s house.

When thy reached grandma’s home, it was night.

They all went to sleep.

Grandma had honey in the loft to make pancakes.

When it was midnight, someone came inside the home by jumping through the window.

Thud! Whisky rabbit opened his eyes, then went back to sleep. Blackie Bear had come to their home. He drank some honey and went to his home, the forest.

When Whisky and Misty mouse got up in the morning, they found the honey lesser than yesterday. Whisky and Misty mouse began to think,

‘Who would have stolen the honey?’Suddenly , Whisky rabbit screamed , “Bears ! Bears love honey”

Misty mouse said, “ Let’s stay awake to night”

Later,that night Whisky and Misty mouse stayed awake .At midnight, Thud !,they saw the bleak bear jump through the window. Whisky and Misty mouse were so kind, they advised the bear,

Stealing is a bad habit, please, do not steel honey ”

the bear agreed , he said,“I will not steel any more”

and he winked as he was lying. Whisky and Misty mouse did not notice that. They went happily to sleep.

Next morning they told everyone that they advised the black bear.

That evening, cheeky and the Misty mouse were painting near the window , after that they had their diner and went to bed. They slept well.

That night the cunning black bear came back.

As usual, he jumped through the window. He stamped the wet paint, but did not bother about that, as he was in a hurry to drink the honey. He drank some more honey and left

Next morning, Whisky and Misty mouse saw the foot prints near the loft. They understood that the black bear didn’t keep his words, and they decided to punish the bear.

Next day , the set a trap for him, covered by a thin carpet. Whisky told the mouse “ I will hide behind this honey pot, when the bear falls in to the trap, I will give u a sign, then u call the inspector Mr.Shersingh.”

That night, everything happened as they planned,

The bear was trapped, Whisky gave a sign, the mouse called the inspector Mr.Shersingh. He arrested the black bear.

Next morning, aunt Kitty and grandma came to know that the black bear was arrested. Grandma was very happy. She was very glad that Whisky and Misty mouse had done this !

She made pancakes with the remaining honey, they all had a delicious feast.

Then aunt kitty, Whisky rabbit and Misty mouse went back to Treetop land happily.

THE END !


Written in 2007 by B Minnal III C

Monday, 7 April 2008

Mary Smith and The Banana Tree

MARYSMITH AND THE BANANA TREE
One day,While walking MarySmith saw a toy shop.She saw a big doll.It's price was RS:50.She liked the big doll very much.She went to her home to check her moneybox.She was very dissapointed because there was only RS:20.She needed RS:30 to buy the doll.Outside her house she saw a coconutman near a coconut tree.She asked to the man"what do you want?"the man said"if you give me the coconuts from the coconut tree i will pay you RS:30.MarySmith couldn't reach the coconuts .So she went to the long stick and said"long stick,long stick,will you take the coconuts and give for me?"The long stick said"i can't reach the coconuts if nobody holds me ,tell the big man to hold me then i can reach the coconuts.So she went to the big man."Big man ,will you hold the long stick for me?"MarySmith asked.The big man said"i will if you ask the elephant to give me some sugarcane.So she went to the elephant and asked"Elephant will you give me some sugarcane"?The elephant said"i will if you give me some bananas"So she went to the banana tree and asked"will you give me some bananas" ?The banana tree said "yes".And shook itself and a bunch of bananas fell in MarySmith's hand.She said "Thankyou" and went to the elephant.She gave the bananas to the elephant.The elephant gave the sugarcane.She gave the sugarcane to the big man .The big man held the long stick and they went to the coconut tree.The long stick put the coconuts down.MarySmith gave the coconuts to the coconut man.The coconut man took the coconuts and gave MarySmith RS:30.She took the money from her moneybox.Now she had RS:50.She went to the toy shop.She asked the shopkeeper that she wanted the big doll.The shopkeeper gave the big doll to her and MarySmith gave him RS:50.She went to her home happily with the big doll in her arms.

THE END
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Sunday, 6 April 2008

Can Money Talk?

CAN MONEY TALK?

There lived three friends.one day,the first friend said"we can go to a restaurant and eat"The two friends agreed.So,they went to a restaurant.They talked and ate as we do.After eating, they went to the cashier to pay the money.The cashier said"Give me the money for talking".The three friends made faces at the cashier.Soon they were quarrelling.The cashier said"Let's go to the judge"So they went to the court.Then they narrated what happened to the judge.The judge was very clever.The judge gave some money to the cashier and said"Here then talk to this money".The cashier was ashamed of himself.Then he and the three friends walked back to the restaurant.The three friends went happily back to their homes.

THE END
Written in 2007 by B Minnal III C

The Lion Cub Who Turned into a Girl

The Lion Cub Who Turned into a Girl
Once a lioness gave birth to a female Cub. Once a hunter was passing by (riding i a horse). He liked the Lion Cub. And the Lion Cub was impressed by the hunter's skills.

So she went to the witch of the forests. She said to the witch, "I want to be a young girl and marry the hunter. But I am a cub." The witch said, "Don't you worry my dear. I will help you. I will change you into a girl. But if the hunter marries another girl, you will remain aq girl forever."

The Cub agreed. She became a girl. She went out of the forest. She went to the hunter's house by asking some good people. And by good sheer of luck. She got married with the hunter.

And you know this story will be ending with "they all lived happily ever after".

The End
Written in 2007 by B Minnal III C

The Proud Kite

The Proud Kite

Once a girl called Tia lived with her parents. One day she was flying a kite. When suddenly a big wind came and blew the kite. Sadly she went to the home disappointed. She told her parents. "Mummy kite is flying above the sky. Will you please take it for me?" But her mother told, "I can't . It's too high".

She went to her father and said him to take the kite. Her father said, "No. It's too high". Tia went to her room sadly.

Meanwhile, the kite was flying. It was a colourful kite with the colours red, blue, yellow and black. It was painted freshly. But it has not dried. It saw the sky and said, "Ha ha ha. You look ugly. See how you are, bluish. See me. I am so colourful." And it went off. The cloud did not say anything.

Next it saw the sun. And the kite said, "How ugly you are! Bright yellow. Ha ha ha." With this it went away. The sun did not say anything.

Next the kite saw a lightning. It said, "How ugly you are!" and it went away.

Next the kite saw a black cloud. It said, "How ugly you are." The cloud flew into rage. And rain came from it. It washed away the paint.

Then it saw the sun. The sun said, "How dare you call me ugly." And it gave the heat. Now there was only a little paint in the kite.

Then the sky came and said, "How dare you call me ugly and it came in front of it and the paint which was left.

Next it saw the wall. It said, "How dare you call me ugly" and it pushed the kite backwards.

Next it saw the lightning. The lightning said, "How dare you call me ugly and made all the light and made the kite fall down.

Meanwhile, Tia was playing with her ball. When she saw her kite, she was delighted. But the kite was broken. Tia went into her home and said, "Mum, Dad, I found my kite. It was in the grass. But it is broken."

So, because it was broken, her parents bought her a new kite.

The End
Written in 2007 by B Minnal III C

There was an old man I knew

There Was an Old Man I Knew

There was an old man I knew
Who workred in a pirate crew
He ate just beans
And wore just jeans
And he raked and leaned
And leaned and raked
And soon he got covered
With leaves, leaves and leaves!
Written in 2008 by B Minnal 4th class

One, Two, three, four

One, Two, three, four

One, two, three, four
Four lorries in the road
Five, six, seven, eight
Have a little bit cake
Nine, ten, nine, ten
Get a little pretty pen!
Written in 2008 by B Minnal 4th class

Wednesday, 2 April 2008

The Two Foolish Gods

The Two Foolish Gods

One day long, long ago before the earth, planets and the universe was
createdonly the gods lived.

Each god was given a work. For example, for fraction there was a god, for
addition one god and so on. In that there were for a.m. and p.m. two gods.
Those two gods were always quarrelling.

The head of all the gods declared that there should be twenty-four hours in a
day. The division god was very clever. All the gods agreed to this decission.
Now the gods for a.m. and p.m. started quarrelling.

The a.m. god said, "you can have eleven hours in charge, I will have thirteen
hours in charge." The p.m. god said, "that's foolish, I will have thirteen hours in
charge you can have eleven hours." He said with a look of anger in his face.
They quarrelled again.

Just then, the division god came and said, "I can find a solution for this problem
."He wrote 2L24 and the answer was 12. So he said, "Each one can have 12
hours". The two gods were satisfied. The head god asked, "how did you do
that?" The division god replied "using division, we can divide any numbers.
That's how I did it." "Good" said the head god.
And that's how everything was created. I hope you liked the story.

THE END
Written in 2008 by B Minnal 4th class

I Want to Help

I want to help

Dear readers,this story will be like a poem. There was a boy called Tim. One day Tim went to his mother. His mother was cooking. Tim asked, "Can I help?"his mother said, "No Tim. You are too young to help. " So, Tim went to his father.


His father was washing the car. Tim asked, "Can I help?" "No Tim. You are too young ", said his father. So Tim went to his elder brother, who was trying to lift a heavy box. He asked again, "Can I help?". Again the reply was the same; his elder brother said, "No Tim. Your hands are very young." Tim went to his elder sister hoping that he could help her. His sister was mending a doll. Tim asked, "Can I help you?" His sister said, "No Tim. You are too young." So Tim went sadly to his grandmother who was knitting a sweater. Tim asked hopefully, "Can I help you?" His grandmother said, "No, Tim, your hands are too small."


Tim went to his grandfather disappointed than ever. His grandfather was reading a book. Tim asked again, "Can I help you?" His grandfather said, "Sure Tim. Here you are", and gave him a book. So Tim helped his grandfather by reading a book.


The End
Written in 2008 by B Minnal 4th class