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Sunday, 3 May 2009

THE HYPNOTIZING TOY CAT


Introduction
This story is not based from the world we live. It is based on the future of our world. The future held many interesting things. Two animals were mixed into one like dognakes, quogs, cowflappers and many more!. But the people living there were cruel, lazy, selfish and very bad mannered. There was one good person who was very good at heart. That was the famous and clever Professor Quentin!.

About Professor Quentin

Professor Quentin was a scientist. He thought "Hmm,I must make all the people kind", He got an idea. He made a toy cat. It was not an ordinary toy cat. It had special powers. Read on and you will see the powers of the cat.

The Story

One day, A boy named Tom saw the cat. He liked the cat very much. So, he bought it. But, he illtreated the toy cat. He would throw them somewhere in his home, he would make it dirty. He would not even bother about. After some days something very unbelievable happened! Tom was about to throw it somewhere,when he suddenly gazed at it. The toy's eyes seemed to swirl around!. He rubbed his eyes and said "It must be a trick of the light. I must be dreaming". He hoped he would soon get up on his bed and he would realise it was all a dream. He stared at its eyes his eyes growing bigger as his curiosity grew bigger. The future people were known to have great curiosity. Then suddenly he felt dazed and he din't know what he was doing!. The simple,ordinary cat had hypnotized him! The cat started to speak in a lulling voice "from now you will never be selfish, unkind or badmannered. You will be very good" it said as it was programmed by Profesor Quentin. It hypnotized the other members of the family, said the same thing and released them from the trance. And amazingly no one knew what they had been doing but they knew they had to be good and kind. This was happening to other children as well! Then slowly, slowly the full future world was good and kind. This was how the full future world became kind. Now don't you think that Professor Quentin was clever?

THE END

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow! nice idea . we need many such cats .can we get one?

geetha said...

Hey Minnal
Loved this story. I am able to connect to this story because my neighbour's son is truly a brat and constantly troubles his pet rabbits-he pokes them with a stick!
I cant understadn why people choose to have petsif they can't take care of them. How I wishe these rabbits too had special powers!
I like your style of writing too. Which class are you in?
Geetha
(chennai)

Minnal said...

thank you for your comments.i am in class5

PP said...

Hai Minnalina,SO nice of you. You have a good dream and vision to have a future world full of nice people. May your dream come true. Also i like the story very much.I wish you write more stories.

Anonymous said...

lovely story and great style of narration.plz publish more stories ,we are waiting

Anonymous said...

superb,keep up the good work